Why I outline?
If you are reading this blog you either want to learn to outline or you haven’t ever done an outline for a short story, yes it’s a different beast entirely. Welcome to the club. There are so many different ways to outline a story from the structure outline to the snowflake method. I used to use the structure method when outlining my novels.
What is the structure method? Well, according to Writer’s Digest it is. “THE “STRUCTURE-PLUS” OUTLINE
The structure-plus outline is the most traditional method, yielding the kind of outline that looks most similar to the one you were likely taught to create by your fourth grade teacher. These outlines contain detailed written descriptions of the individual scenes that will progress in a linear fashion throughout your novel.”
Ex:
I. SETTING: The back room at Spaghetti O’Plenty; 5 p.m.
CHARACTERS: Rhys; his girlfriend, Trina; Trina’s manager at the restaurant
PURPOSE: To complicate the plot and build tension between Rhys and Trina
a. Rhys gets his acceptance letter to a prestigious art school and, excited, goes to Trina’s work with the intention of telling her.
i. Trina goes on break and takes him to the back room.
ii. “I need to tell you something,” Trina says. “I’m pregnant.”
iii. Trina’s manager interrupts, “Trina, we need you on Table 7.”
b. Rhys is shocked, and can feel his dream of being a painter slipping away.
i. “What are you going to do?” Rhys asks.
ii. “Me? What am I going to do? We’re in this together,” Trina says, upset.
iii. Trina’s manager comes in and sees her crying. “Leave her alone and get out of here,” he says. “Trina, I said Table 7.”
c. Rhys leaves the restaurant, crumpling up the letter and throwing it away on his way out.
So why do I outline? I like to think of outlining as doing a sketch of the story. I write romance suspense and noir mystery and in both genres you need to keep track of the bad guy’s actions and the clues they leave behind. Personally I can’t do that without an outline.
What’s different about outlining for a short story versus a novel?
Why is outlining a short story different from a novel? Well, in a novel you have more time to develop character, work with subplots, and immerse the reader in the world you are creating. In a short story you have to tell a story in what is currently 5 to 10,000 words. And don’t forget you have to make it memorable.
I started my writing career, writing romance suspense novels which go from 40 to 60,000 words. These novels are also part of a series so I needed to insert subplots for other books in the series into each novel. That is a lot of words compared to the 10k for a short story. I needed to keep on track. How did I do that?
Here are my tips and tricks?
Plan it out with this short story outline table. You can print it out or make a copy of it in your drive or on your computer to use for yourself. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JzSmXn6SEvJByeXD1vkjuOkpxss8wNTutmJI2kXECts/edit?usp=sharing
Pick a singular idea for the story, scene, paragraph and sentence.
Don’t know where to start RanGen has a plot generator https://www.rangen.co.uk/writing/plotgen.php
A Murphy’s Law generator https://www.rangen.co.uk/writing/murlawgen.php
Awkward moment generator https://www.rangen.co.uk/writing/awkwardgen.php
First encounter generator https://www.rangen.co.uk/writing/encountergen.php
I use their site character generator for describing non-important characters and to get names for characters.
Get to the point and fast. Once you have your five basic scenes don’t add too much more to it than that and it will keep your story short.
I would love to hear about your short stories or your favorite short story. What was my favorite short story?
I think it was by Orson Scott Card. I don’t like the person but I like some of his writing. It was about a chess game between a dragon and a unicorn I believe.
What I’m working on now?
I’m currently in between writing projects. I finished drafting Home Fires 2.1 earlier this month. Next month I will be writing another short story When I Left 1.1 a story for my LGBTQ+ Urban Fantasy Noir mystery series.
I’ve been working on a wiki for the Urban Fantasy series in Campfire Blaze with the help of one of my favorite writing buddies. She will have a book coming soon to beta readers so keep an eye out here and on my social media because I’ll be sharing it.
I received the best gift ever. The Rymek keyboard. Thank you DC Sadie. It makes me want to get up and write everyday.
What I’m reading?
My reading challenge 75/80
An interesting moment happened today.
We have been having electrical brownouts today. Summer is here in North Texas. After the third time the electricity going down, I walked away from my computer and headed to the post office box to check my author mail. I ran into a lovely young man helping out L.E.A.D Law Enforcement against Drugs on the street and in the Classroom. They were selling items to raise money for supplies in the classroom. It just so happened that our Grandmother’s share the same first name and we spent a few moments talking about how much of a rock star our Grandmother’s are and were. He had lost his to senseless violence. I promised him that I would share the organization's information with you all. So here it is
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